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I think the H-scenes are gone, even with the lewdness on. Unless there's a specific path I have to take I'm not seeing them, and I've pretty much replayed the game 50 times now with different paths and nothing...

Usually fanfics like this are absolute dogshit, like for real, but this is amazing! This little dumb fanfic project rivals that of legit professional VNs. The writing is good, the story is enjoyable, the VN actually makes you do shit other than click the enter button. I love how, despite how little the author had to work with in the sprite department, they tried their hardest. The story is well thought out and is very... Pokemon. I few problems to think about, of course the game needs more consistent sprites. I'd love to see more content, it would suck to see this VN end, I believe there's definitely more material to be added. The route I took when playing this game is one where I romanced Dawn after the tournament, although I found out you could do it before the tournament. I feel like that should be removed, the route I took seemed way more realistic and made a lot more sense, the other one felt like easy romance if you know what I'm saying. I liked the side story about the protagonist and his scyther, I definitely feel like that bond added to the overall experience, and I would love to see that explored more. I love the addition of battles, it added some actual gameplay to the Visual Novel. Again I'd love to see more content, maybe more things you and Dawn can do. I also noticed that you can romance dawn and then continue the story only to be presented with an opportunity to romance her again, and by the time the second opportunity strikes it acts like the first romance never happened, and both the character and Dawn start admitting their love for each other again, in other words the game kinda loops, which was weird. I'd love to see the monetary system explored a bit more, I also think there should be some sort of way for the player to know how many days left they have until the cruise is over. Idk if there's any bad endings but maybe their should be. Anyways good shit, I'm definitely gonna be following the creator of this game like a cat and a mouse.

Never, it's abandonware